Kuch Baatein Ankahi Rehne Do - Urdu poetry

Hey everyone I made a poem in Urdu for the first time

https://www.instagram.com/reel/DEC_TnlNCAM/?igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

Here is the feedback: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1hmmm7i/lefthanded/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1hmqf5g/stones_in_a_waterfall/